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Please let me know how the Chip/Freedom dialogue looks. Can you read it, or should I try a different method of showing that they're speaking telepathically?

Also, I just wanted to add a note about some choices in this chapter. I was hesitant to bring Chip back. Yes, he's a ghost and he actually won't appear very often or influence the story much, but I did want him to remain in the comic because his personal story isn't resolved yet and I still had plans for him. I understand that people may see this as a poor choice or a cop-out from his death and I'm more than happy to discuss it in the comments. But know that I did think long and hard before making this decision and I believe it will work out for the better of the story.

As always, thanks for the support! You guys rock!!

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